Ok, the end was taking too long, so I decided to go back to the beginning and do a little fleshing out of the story, one chapter at a time.
Chapter One is done. For NOW, of course. I got a few more lines in, took some nonsense out. Established some characters and their relationship, and sort of what they looked like and how they related to the other important characters coming up. I really hope I didn’t beat the hell out of the Exposition button.
I would rather give too much information in the early drafts that not enough. That way, it makes some stuff easier to cut out or put somewhere else altogether.
Anyway, Chapter One has 1423 words and 5 pages.
Chapter Two is up next.
But I think you knew that.